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	<title>Comments on: Self-Editing #2: Character Description</title>
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		<title>By: Barbara Ann Wright</title>
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		<dc:creator>Barbara Ann Wright</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 24 Aug 2010 18:50:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Luckily, I had a &quot;How to write..&quot; book when I was younger, so I&#039;ve never done the mirror. I have made the goof of describing a character when we&#039;re in their pov before. Now I only try to do it when it&#039;s something the reader &quot;has&quot; to know.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Luckily, I had a &#8220;How to write..&#8221; book when I was younger, so I&#8217;ve never done the mirror. I have made the goof of describing a character when we&#8217;re in their pov before. Now I only try to do it when it&#8217;s something the reader &#8220;has&#8221; to know.</p>
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		<title>By: Faith</title>
		<link>http://boughanfire.com/2010/08/self-editing-2-character-description/#comment-11884</link>
		<dc:creator>Faith</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 23 Aug 2010 13:15:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>When I write first drafts, I&#039;ll sometimes switch back and forth with POVs every so often, just to experiment with voice. Sometimes it helps me... other times it&#039;s just confusing.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>When I write first drafts, I&#8217;ll sometimes switch back and forth with POVs every so often, just to experiment with voice. Sometimes it helps me&#8230; other times it&#8217;s just confusing.</p>
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		<title>By: Kate</title>
		<link>http://boughanfire.com/2010/08/self-editing-2-character-description/#comment-11796</link>
		<dc:creator>Kate</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 20 Aug 2010 16:55:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>POV is my second least favourite thing (verb tenses are the worst).  I have a chapter (A WHOLE CHAPTER) in &quot;The Stone Thief&quot; that&#039;s written from a different POV than the rest of the story, and I have NO IDEA how to fix it.  Mostly, I&#039;ve been ignoring it and hoping it will go away.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>POV is my second least favourite thing (verb tenses are the worst).  I have a chapter (A WHOLE CHAPTER) in &#8220;The Stone Thief&#8221; that&#8217;s written from a different POV than the rest of the story, and I have NO IDEA how to fix it.  Mostly, I&#8217;ve been ignoring it and hoping it will go away.</p>
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