Comments on: P is for Purses, Satchels, and Bags http://boughanfire.com/2011/04/p-is-for-purses-satchels-and-bags/ Thu, 13 Jan 2022 01:40:01 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: masonian http://boughanfire.com/2011/04/p-is-for-purses-satchels-and-bags/#comment-22193 masonian Sat, 30 Apr 2011 20:28:45 +0000 http://boughanfire.com/?p=1301#comment-22193 oy vey! How embarassing for the writer! I expect lapses like that by, say, Michael Bay (in transformers they manage to drive from LA to the Hoover Dam in Las Vegas in under 5 minutes), but in the written word? For shame! :) oy vey! How embarassing for the writer!

I expect lapses like that by, say, Michael Bay (in transformers they manage to drive from LA to the Hoover Dam in Las Vegas in under 5 minutes), but in the written word?

For shame! :)

]]> By: Chris Kelworth http://boughanfire.com/2011/04/p-is-for-purses-satchels-and-bags/#comment-21998 Chris Kelworth Sat, 23 Apr 2011 10:54:54 +0000 http://boughanfire.com/?p=1301#comment-21998 That's a good point about continuity, and it doesn't just have to be about bags. In some of the stories I write, I actually have to draw flowcharts for who goes where in what car, to make sure that vehicles aren't mysteriously appearing at point A or being left behind at point B just for the sake of the way I'm grouping my characters. I'm starting up a 'Critiquing Crusaders' program, where participants in the Second Crusade can find other writers to exchange critiques with or form critiquing circles. If you're interested, come by <a href='http://kelworthfiles.wordpress.com/critiquing-crusaders/' rel="nofollow">The Kelworth Files</a> to check it out! That’s a good point about continuity, and it doesn’t just have to be about bags.

In some of the stories I write, I actually have to draw flowcharts for who goes where in what car, to make sure that vehicles aren’t mysteriously appearing at point A or being left behind at point B just for the sake of the way I’m grouping my characters.

I’m starting up a ‘Critiquing Crusaders’ program, where participants in the Second Crusade can find other writers to exchange critiques with or form critiquing circles. If you’re interested, come by The Kelworth Files to check it out!

]]> By: Shannon Lawrence http://boughanfire.com/2011/04/p-is-for-purses-satchels-and-bags/#comment-21991 Shannon Lawrence Sat, 23 Apr 2011 06:01:20 +0000 http://boughanfire.com/?p=1301#comment-21991 Murg, things like that can be surprisingly distracting. I only had backpacks to keep track of, and they weren't around too much, thankfully. Good luck with the rest of the A to Z Challenge! Murg, things like that can be surprisingly distracting. I only had backpacks to keep track of, and they weren’t around too much, thankfully.

Good luck with the rest of the A to Z Challenge!

]]> By: Barbara Ann Wright http://boughanfire.com/2011/04/p-is-for-purses-satchels-and-bags/#comment-21963 Barbara Ann Wright Fri, 22 Apr 2011 19:22:35 +0000 http://boughanfire.com/?p=1301#comment-21963 Mine usually have pouches or backpacks. Mine usually have pouches or backpacks.

]]> By: L. Diane Wolfe http://boughanfire.com/2011/04/p-is-for-purses-satchels-and-bags/#comment-21947 L. Diane Wolfe Fri, 22 Apr 2011 12:52:20 +0000 http://boughanfire.com/?p=1301#comment-21947 Now that is a continuity snafu! Now that is a continuity snafu!

]]> By: Vicki Tremper http://boughanfire.com/2011/04/p-is-for-purses-satchels-and-bags/#comment-21919 Vicki Tremper Thu, 21 Apr 2011 21:48:36 +0000 http://boughanfire.com/?p=1301#comment-21919 Whoops. LOL! Whoops. LOL!

]]> By: Matt Vanacore http://boughanfire.com/2011/04/p-is-for-purses-satchels-and-bags/#comment-21918 Matt Vanacore Thu, 21 Apr 2011 20:29:08 +0000 http://boughanfire.com/?p=1301#comment-21918 Wow. What a startling discovery. And you told it with such fierce intrigue. I felt like I was reading the story right along with you. Well-done. And I really like your blog interface. It's unique. I'm following! Wow. What a startling discovery. And you told it with such fierce intrigue. I felt like I was reading the story right along with you. Well-done.

And I really like your blog interface. It’s unique. I’m following!

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