27
Apr

Submission Update

   Posted by: Faith   in Fiction on Foccacia

Happiness! The short story I worked on like mad a few weeks back, Firebird’s Embrace, has been accepted by Emerald Tales for their June issue, themed ‘Midsummer’s Eve’.

I believe it releases on June 15th; you can purchase the print edition from the website, or read it for free online (a change from previous editions).

It seems to me that I work much better on a strict deadline (big surprise)… and I had felt quite unsure about this one, so it’s a happy surprise!

Anyone else have some good news to share? Or bad news… sometimes it’s cathartic to share that too. :)

26
Apr

Thinking About Business

   Posted by: Faith   in Everything Else

Writing, for many of us, isn’t just the hobby we sometimes make it out to be: It’s a business, and in many cases we need to treat it like one. We send in resumes and proposals (ie. queries) and wait for our interview (ie. partials or fulls) and hope to get “hired”. It’s joyful and exciting when we succeed, and sad when we don’t — but giving up isn’t an option. We keep pushing forward, with the knowledge that if we continue searching and putting ourselves and our work out there, eventually (providing we also concentrate on upgrading our skills) we’ll find the success or measure of acceptance that we hoped for.

In that sense, it’s a business.

But what about the people on the other end?

This topic comes to mind as I struggle with a conflict at a particular place of employment, which I won’t name for the sake of making sure this doesn’t come back to bite me later…

As many of you know, I’m heavily involved in a local subset of the dance community, and I also teach classes at various locations. One day while at a studio (which I shall refer to as “StudioAwesome” for the sake of this post), the owner asked some people whether they could recommend anyone who would be appropriate to come in and teach an appreciation night for StudioAwesome’s instructors. She wanted to hold a private event, at StudioAwesome, offering a fun little dance routine in a style none of us know… it just so happened that I knew a few people who taught the particular dance style, so I recommended a few names.

One of the names I recommended works for a studio that I shall refer to as “StudioExclusive” for the sake of this post. I mentioned that Instructor X would be an excellent choice for StudioAwesome’s appreciation night, as Instructor X had the experience and knowledge necessary to teach the dance style and work with experienced dancers. I also mentioned that since Instructor X was currently employed with StudioExclusive, hiring might need to be done through StudioExclusive. Sounds reasonable, right?

From my point of view, I…

  • gave a personal recommendation for an instructor at a non-competing studio
  • promoted StudioExclusive through recommending their instructor
  • mentioned the instructor’s potential prior obligation to StudioExclusive

I did nothing but PROMOTE StudioExclusive through my recommendation.

The owner of StudioAwesome proceeded to contact the instructors I recommended, just as a business owner is expected to, in order to find the best fit for her appreciation event. She wanted to find the right person for the job, to put it bluntly.

A few days later, the owner of StudioAwesome received an angry email from the owner of StudioExclusive, accusing the StudioAwesome owner of “going behind her back” and trying to “steal her instructors”, etc etc. Naturally, the StudioAwesome owner was beyond shocked… these two studios are non-competing, and have cross-promoted each other for some time… and rather than the instructor writing back with a simple “hey, I’m under a specific exclusivity contract, would you mind contacting my boss instead?”, the instructor notified the owner who took a defensive and possessive stance, immediately throwing out accusations.

This, my friends, is no way to run a business. In a case of a potential misunderstanding, you don’t throw out accusations of trying to undermine the other person’s business — you need to clarify the situation first, then discuss things in a civilized manner. Beyond that, StudioExclusive claims that anyone who had ever taught that dance style for her, regardless of whether they were employed with her now, and anyone who had ever taken a class in that dance style at her studio cannot teach that style anywhere else, for the rest of eternity, according to an exclusivity contract they sign when they attend the class/are hired.

(I can tell you right now, I took that class ONCE about five years ago, and I certainly didn’t sign any contract like that. I put my signature down under the understanding that it was a health/safety waiver, like all other studios have.)

It made me think about all the places we submit to, and the way we get our writing out there… when we submit our work and it’s published in Magazine A, magazine A retains rights to that particular story for some time… but that doesn’t mean we can’t submit more of our work elsewhere. In fact, if we have a bio line in magazine B, we’ll probably mention that our work was previously published in magazine A, therefore promoting that other magazine to anyone who liked our work. Then, what will the reader do? Likely, search out our work in both magazine A *and* magazine B. It’s cross-promotion at its finest.

So, why would someone demand that their CONTRACT EMPLOYEES work exclusively for them, if they have the time to teach elsewhere in a non-competing capacity (ie. an appreciation night, a magazine with a different audience) if it’s only going to benefit both businesses?

To me, that’s an issue of control that takes things way too far. That only makes the second business (ie. StudioExclusive) look bad, and reflects poorly on them in the long run… and it loses money for them, because they lose out on the potential new customers that would arise from the cross-promotional work.

Needless to say, StudioExclusive will not be receiving my recommendations in the future, and I plan to cut ties with them as soon as my own contract is up. Not only is the control issue extremely bad business on their end, but the accusations thrown around without even an attempt to clarify the situation is unacceptable.

Yes, I know this post wasn’t entirely about writing… but sometimes it’s good to think about the business side of things too, as a situation perhaps not dissimilar to this one might come up for you someday in the writing world (or even in your day job). We can’t always separate business from our writing, but we always need to be aware of good business practices, and how to communicate effectively with one another in delicate situations.

20
Apr

Book Review: “Heartless”

   Posted by: Faith   in Tasty Tomes

Heartless – Anne Elisabeth Stengl (Available July 1st, 2010)

From the Back Cover…

The Dragon King Seeks His Princess– Who Dares to Stop Him? Princess Una of Parumvir has come of age and will soon marry. She dreams of a charming prince, but when her first suitor arrives, he’s not what she’d hoped. Prince Aethelbald of mysterious Farthestshore has travelled a great distance to prove his love–and also to bring hushed warnings of danger. A dragon is rumored to be on the hunt and blazing a path of terror.

Una, smitten instead with a more dashing prince, refuses Aethelbald’s offer–and ignores his cautions with dire consequences. Soon the Dragon King himself is in Parumvir and Una, in giving her heart away unwisely, finds herself in his sights. Only those courageous enough to risk everything have a hope of fighting off this advancing evil.

My Thoughts…

After reading the rather cliched back cover copy, I approached this book with skepticism… I hoped it wouldn’t be that bad, but I kept putting off reading it because I didn’t want to start yet another mediocre fantasy and have to write a lukewarm review on another ER book.

Honestly, it didn’t start well… it was a bit slow, the writing style was in that vague, flow-y fantasy vein that tends to annoy me to no end (why can’t the author just SPEAK PLAINLY?!), and the plot seemed rather generic.

So, imagine my surprise when, in the second half of the book, I became extremely invested in the characters, the plot, and the world that Stengl created. In fact, I read the entire book in one sitting… I think I got up once to refill my tea mug.

The book has its weaknesses: the heroine is a bit underdeveloped, and the love story feels somewhat contrived. But it also has its strengths: the way dragons are born was unexpected and unique, and the hero (and his rival) are rather interesting on their own terms.

One thing to note is, I spent the first two thirds of the book waiting for the ‘Christian’ part of the book to happen… it’s published as a CBA book, which usually means some form of evangelism will appear at least for a few pages (even in the rare CBA fantasy novels), and imagine my delight when I realized that… it wasn’t coming. There wasn’t going to be a forced ‘Christianese’ aspect to the world, rather, the book simply reflected a Christian worldview and let the story stand on its own as a well written, interesting fantasy novel.

I will say that I don’t think the book will be for everyone. I’m also not entirely sure how this is going to develop as a series, which is clearly the author’s intent — I think it does well as a stand-alone.

I received a complimentary copy of this book through LibraryThing.com’s ER program.

14
Apr

You Know You’re a Writer When…

   Posted by: Faith   in Rye Thoughts

…you spend your entire day in your pjs, haven’t showered for 3 days, sit at the computer hitting “refresh” on your email (or Twitter, or Facebook) every 5 minutes, and subsisting on nothing but coffee, pre-packaged rice, and lip gloss.

Yes, there’s a deadline for a magazine tomorrow, and I’m trying my darnedest to get this story done so I can send it in. I don’t even think I’ll have time to send it to my crit buddies first… o_O

Oh well. If I don’t make it, I don’t make it… and at least I’ve spent a day feeling like a writer. A dirty, half-starved writer.

Ah, yes… this is the life we live for, my friends. Write on.

10
Apr

Book Review: ‘Kaleidoscope’

   Posted by: Faith   in Tasty Tomes

Kaleidoscope - Patsy Clairmont

Clairmont’s newest book is a devotional-style offering, presenting short chapters (ideal for busy women) that reflect on specific passages in Proverbs. The chapters address everything from fear to friendship to anxiety, using Clairmont’s trademark lighthearted approach to subjects that might normally bog down a book like this.

It’s certainly an easy read, and the kind of book that I would recommend as a gift to a female Christian friend or relative — particularly someone who’s having difficulty seeing the lighter side of life and needs some reassurance that God is in control. However, be forewarned that it doesn’t contain the same amount of humor that many of us have some to expect from Clairmont — but then, the book isn’t really meant to be funny, so from that angle it makes sense.

Above all, it’s an easy read and Clairmont’s anecdotes give the book a friendly, earthy tone — like you’re meeting a girlfriend for coffee and chatting about life and how God fits into it.

No, it’s not the best book available on the topic, but it does what it sets out to do, and it does it well. Like I said, it would make an excellent gift — but buy it early so you have a chance to read it first. :)

I received this book free from Thomas Nelson Publishers as part of their BookSneeze.com book review bloggers program. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own.

7
Apr

A Fun YA/MG Contest!

   Posted by: Faith   in Everything Else

Have a completed YA or MG manuscript that you’ve been itching to do something with?

This morning I learned about the “Dear Lucky Agents” contest being held by Writer’s Digest, open until April 14th… full details are HERE.

Here’s a few of the details to pique your curiosity:

WHAT TO SUBMIT

The first 150-200 words of your unpublished, book-length work of middle grade or young adult fiction. You must include a contact e-mail address with your entry and use your real name. Also, submit the title of the work and a logline (one-sentence description of the work) with your entry.

PRIZES!!!

Top 3 winners all get: 1) A critique of 10 pages of your work, by your agent judge. 2) A free one-year subscription to WritersMarket.com.

…and the best part is… no entry fee! Just a couple of required mentions on social networking. I might even manage to enter this one!

Head over, read the rest of the details, and submit something! After all… why not? :)

5
Apr

Intelligent Failure

   Posted by: Faith   in Rye Thoughts

Just a couple words of encouragement this Monday morning:

“All research is 99 percent failure, and if you succeed once you are in. If we are going to progress in any line, we must learn to fail intelligently, so we won’t become discouraged at the 99 percent failures.” — Charles Kettering.

Fail intelligently… I like the sound of that. Doesn’t make it seem quite so bad, when you put it that way.

So, I say… go forth and fail! But be smart about it. We could all learn something from this approach.

1
Apr

March Blog Tour: “Pistachio”

   Posted by: Faith   in Tasty Tomes

Who doesn’t love VeggieTales? It’s been a long time since I sat down and watched a whole VeggieTales DVD from start to finish… and after watching this new installment — Pistachio: The Little Boy That Woodn’t – I’m sorry it took me this long to start watching them again!

Synopsis (from publisher):

Once upon a time in the small Italian town of Bologna-Salami, there lived a lonely toymaker named Gelato and his assistant Cricket. Gelato had no children he could call his own, so one day he decided to carve a little boy out of wood. Imagine Gelato’s surprise when he learned that this little toy boy could walk… and talk… and definitely had a mind of his own!

Like the little lost sheep who strays from the fold, Pistachio decides to try things his way and lands in a “whale” of a situation! Will Pistachio learn that obeying the wisdom of a loving father will help him find what he really needs and could be the key to saving his whole family from becoming fish food? Find out in this all new VeggieTales adventure with a lesson about the importance of family and listening to your parents.

My Thoughts:

With the series’ trademark humor that spans generations, this latest installment in the VeggieTales franchise does what it sets out to do: entertain while teaching an important life truth.

The animation is as good as always, and I particularly liked the sidekick characters: Cricket (not a cricket) and the three ducklings. Mind you, the ducklings seemed pretty random — why did the toymaker care for ducks? and how did that add to the story? it didn’t… — but they added some laughs and upped the ‘cute’ factor in general.

Admittedly, I’m not sure how successful the story was at conveying its message, but I think that part is really up to the parents or caretakers afterward… this is the kind of thing I would gladly show to my friends’ kids and discuss with them afterward, in order to emphasize and reinforce the message about the importance of listening to your parents.

In Conclusion…

If it’s been awhile since you watched a VeggieTales, how come? Although this particular story didn’t have as many laughs as some of the earlier tales (we’re talking 6+ years since I watched one, here…), the quality of the films certainly hasn’t suffered, if this one was any indication, and I am determined to track down the DVDs I’ve missed over the years and watch them… purely for my own enjoyment :)

Whether it’s for your church library, your own family, the children of friends or relatives, or even for yourself, Pistachio is a well-crafted addition to the VeggieTales library. And with a good message to boot!

DVD has been provided courtesy of David C Cook and Graf-Martin Communications, Inc. Available now at your local Christian retailer.

25
Mar

March Blog Tour: ‘Hearts Awakening’

   Posted by: Faith   in Tasty Tomes

Can you believe it’s the end of March already? Talk about a month flying by… seems like just last week I was writing up the February tour reviews.

Anyway, this month I have one book and one DVD to share with you! Today we’ll take a look at the book, and next Monday we’ll talk about the DVD.

So… onward!

Hearts Awakening: A Novel – Delia Parr (www.deliaparr.com)

Synopsis (from the publisher):

Two people in desperate circumstances.
One unlikely proposal.

Life has left few choices for Elvira Kilmer. Her hopes for marriage and a family of her own have long since passed her by, and her arrival on Dillon’s Island, nestled in the Susquehanna River, is not of her choosing, either. She needs work. And Jackson Smith needs a housekeeper.

Yet Ellie never imagined the widower would be so young… so handsome.

Jackson, on the other hand, has never met anyone quite so… plain. But he quickly comes to realize that Ellie’s presence may solve his own problems–both the rearing of his young boys and the scandal that surrounds his first marriage.

When Jackson offers her something quite out of the ordinary, will Ellie look beyond mere necessity and risk opening her heart?

My Thoughts:

A nice story without much substance.

The plot itself is mediocre and winds its way along without taking any risks or leaps, staying predictable and comfortable. Thus I would say, if you want a book that isn’t going to surprise you and that you can simply follow along for the sake of following a nice story, this one’s for you.

However, that’s also what bothered me. There weren’t any risks. The main character was flawless, despite the “secret” she held (which you can guess in the first 10 pages) — even the cookstove that she struggles with and burns food on isn’t much of a flaw at all, as it’s something external that she has to conquer. The things others see as flaws — she’s too old to ever find a husband, she’s plain-looking — aren’t flaws, they’re external obstacles. Where’s the internal development? Where’s the weak point that helps us regular people connect with the character?

The hero of the story is definitely flawed, but the problem is with his reactionary attitude throughout the novel. I understand why he does it, as the backstory clearly explains, but he doesn’t learn and reacts the same way every time. Yes, I get that he’s stubborn, but it would help to have a little more dialogue to flesh out the reactions rather than the basic “extreme action + consequence + revelation that he’s in the wrong” every single time.

Finally, the love angle. Oh, how this bothered me to no end. In a story like this, you know that the couple is going to fall in love by the end of the book, it’s no secret. You read these books for the journey, not for the end result, and that’s where the charm lies — or is supposed to. I kept waiting for hints on both sides, things that would make me believe that they were truly falling for each other, but I was disappointed and felt slightly cheated… because in the end, we’re told that they’ve fallen for each other, rather than truly and honestly shown. Personally, I thought the heroine’s side of the story was the most cheated of the two, as we learn in one sentence that she’s developed feelings for him, rather than having the reader follow the development of those feelings from the get-go.

In Conclusion…

Like I said at the beginning of the review, if you want a comfortable read, this is the kind of book to go to. It does exactly what you expect (in fact, my husband read the back cover copy, smiled, and proceeded to ‘predict’ the plot… which he got exactly right), and in that respect it does what it promises the reader it will do. So that’s a good thing!

I only wish that there had been some more risks taken within the story (and character development!), and that the love story follow-through hadn’t been rushed — a bit better pacing in that area would have made this a more well-rounded book.

I’d say this is another one for church libraries — many women borrow from their church libraries looking for “comfort reads”, so I believe it would find a wide audience there.

Want to try it out for yourself? Read an excerpt from the novel HERE.

Available now at your favorite bookseller from Bethany House,

a division of Baker Publishing Group.

22
Mar

Monday Encouragement

   Posted by: Faith   in Everything Else

If you haven’t visited agent Rachelle Gardner’s blog lately, you’re missing out! She writes quality posts with helpful information, both for unagented and agented writers.

Her most recent post is something that I bet we all need to hear once in awhile, and especially on a gloomy Monday morning: Success stories of writers whose perseverance finally paid off.

The post, “Perseverance Really is Key”, is found HERE.

Head over, read it, and have a Monday Smile (which for me are far and few between!).

So… keep writing.

We can do this!