https://boughanfire.com/2010/08/self-editing-5-say-it-dont-think-it/ Thu, 13 Jan 2022 01:40:01 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 https://boughanfire.com/2010/08/self-editing-5-say-it-dont-think-it/#comment-12082 Faith Tue, 31 Aug 2010 21:14:35 +0000 http://boughanfire.com/2010/08/self-editing-5-say-it-dont-think-it/#comment-12082 It's tough, isn't it! It's a hard slog to get them all, but ultimately it makes the story read so much smoother and cleaner. It’s tough, isn’t it! It’s a hard slog to get them all, but ultimately it makes the story read so much smoother and cleaner.

]]> https://boughanfire.com/2010/08/self-editing-5-say-it-dont-think-it/#comment-12063 Tessa Quin Tue, 31 Aug 2010 11:04:16 +0000 http://boughanfire.com/2010/08/self-editing-5-say-it-dont-think-it/#comment-12063 I keep removing these from my manuscript. I think I have them all out by now. I also point them out to people I'm cirtting. It took me a while to understand that if we're reading from the character's POV, we know that they're thinking/wondering/considering etc. stuff. I keep removing these from my manuscript. I think I have them all out by now. I also point them out to people I’m cirtting. It took me a while to understand that if we’re reading from the character’s POV, we know that they’re thinking/wondering/considering etc. stuff.

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