8
Sep

Where’d She Go?

   Posted by: Faith   in Rye Thoughts

Don’t worry, I’m right here!

My apologies — I didn’t get the book review up that I promised you, and you’re also waiting for the winner of the book draw. I know, I failed, alas!

It’s taken me longer to recover from my vacation than I thought, but I’ll get back into the swing of things today… post something useful, check your comments, and try to get back to visiting your blogs (I have so much to catch up on!).

So… talk to you soon! And I’ll announce the winner of the Amish Proverbs giveaway on Thursday. Yay! :D

5
Sep

In My Mailbox (10)

   Posted by: Faith   in Tasty Tomes

Whoo-hoo! Ten official IMM posts so far… I should have started this a long time ago! This week will only showcase what I received for the first half of the week, since I’m AFK at the moment and wrote this earlier in the week. So… here we go!

FYI: In my mailbox is a weekly meme started by The Story Siren to showcase books you’ve received for review, bought, borrowed, or swapped. Anyone can participate, and it’s a great way to showcase new books and encourage blogger/commenter interaction!

Review Copy of

 

Running Around
(And Such)

 

by Linda Byler

 

 

 

 

 

It looks adorable! I haven’t read any ‘bonnet fiction’ in a long, long time, since the genre seemed to become so saturated with repetitive tales and mediocre writing… but this one was written by an active member of the Amish community, and is based on her true experiences. I’m excited to find out what it’s like!

How about you… what came in your mailbox this week? :)

4
Sep

Self-Editing #7: Redundant Pleonasms

   Posted by: Faith   in Creating Coldcuts

…and yes, that title is an example of a pleonasm. In case you were about to point fingers. HAH!

So, what the heck is a pleonasm, anyway? Sounds to me like some kind of strange bacteria you’d go to the doctor to get medication for.

“Sorry, ma’am, but you have a serious case of the pleonasm virus. It’s been going around, so don’t worry, I’ll write you up a prescription for that…”

But that is NOT what a pleonasm is. Nay, a pleonasm is defined as such by the ever-reliable dictionary.com:

ple·o·nasm

[plee-uh-naz-uhm] Show IPA

–noun

1. the use of more words than are necessary to express an idea; redundancy.

2. an instance of this, as free gift or true fact.

3. a redundant word or expression.

Ah… okay, now it’s making more sense. I think. Now, not to repeat myself (har har), but it appears that a pleonasm is a word or phrase that repeats itself.

This is really easy to do in first drafts, and I bet we all do it without thinking. Here are some more examples (redundancies in italics):

  • “It cost $10 dollars.”
  • “He saw it with his own eyes.”
  • “We got to the bar at around two a.m. in the morning.”
  • “The table was square in shape.”
  • “He yawned tiredly.”

Yes, I’m guilty of this… anyone else? Fortunately, this is really easy to cut out of the manuscript, though not always as easy to catch (that’s what critique partners are for!).

As always, thanks to the lovely agent Kelly Mortimer for inspiring this post and the others in the self-editing series. Her grammar guide made me think long and hard about certain things in my own work, and I wondered whether others had similar issues… so hopefully you’re learning things along with me! :)

2
Sep

Self-Editing #6: Be Wise, Italicize

   Posted by: Faith   in Rye Thoughts

…by which I do not mean, pour Italian dressing all over your keyboard or manuscript. Yes, it would be tasty, but not entirely sanitary. So, how about using the Italics feature in your word processor instead?

“But I already know how to use the italics feature,” you say.

“Writing in second person won’t convince them,” I reply.

Er… moving on, what I’m talking about here is using Italics for any and all media references included in your manuscript. This can apply to any genre – coMmm... zesty AND value sized!ntemporary, fantasy, historical – because it includes all of these things:

  • TV shows
  • Books
  • Magazines
  • Radio Shows
  • Plays
  • Operas
  • Newspapers
  • Movies
  • Specific works of art

All of these things need, nay, deserve to be named in Italics on the pages of your manuscript.

“That’s all well and good,” you may say, “But I thought we were supposed to use quotation marks for some of those?”

Ah… quotation marks are a different beast altogether. You would use quotation marks for media like:

  • Songs
  • Stories (which are not full-length books)
  • Poems
  • Articles
  • TV episodes
  • Famous photographs

Why do those items get the short end of the stick and only receive quotation marks? Well, my friends, that’s simply the way of the world. A good general rule to remember this by is: If it’s a complete work with multiple components, put it in italics. If it’s a work that belongs in a larger collection, put it in quotation marks. Of course, this will just confuse you when it comes to things like paintings/works of art/photographs, but I did say it was a general rule.

Have you used this system in the past, or have you been playing a guessing game with media in your manuscripts?

31
Aug

Coming Up… This Week!

   Posted by: Faith   in Rye Thoughts

Hello LOVELY readers!!!

Can you believe August is over already?! I can’t… I have too much to do before September hits (so… before tomorrow!) and not enough time to do it in!

I wanted to let you know that I’ll be AFK from tomorrow until the beginning of next week… so if your comments don’t show up right away, or if I don’t comment back right away (or visit your blog in return!) it’s not because I don’t love you!!! I’ll catch up when I’m back, promise!

But, I won’t leave you with nothing to read. :) Just so you know & have something to look forward to, here’s a quick list of what’s upcoming for the first week of September:

 

Sept. 2nd - Self-Editing #6: Be Wise, Italicize

Sept. 4th – Self-Editing #7: Redundant Pleonasms

Sept. 5th – In My Mailbox (10)

Sept. 6th – Book Review: ‘All I Ever Wanted’ – Kristin Higgins 

 

Hopefully that’ll keep you occupied over the weekend… and while you’re at it, don’t forget to enter my contest to win a copy of ‘Amish Proverbs’ by Suzanne Woods Fisher! Contest ends Sept. 6th, so pop on over and tell us one of your family’s favorite sayings!

See you all when I hit the keyboard again! :)

31
Aug

August Blog Tour: ‘Masquerade’

   Posted by: Faith   in Rye Thoughts

Book four and the end of the tour! More to come at the end of September…

Masquerade – Nancy Moser

masq  They risk it all for adventure and romance, but find that love only flourishes in truth…

1886. Charlotte Gleason embarks from England with conflicting emotions. She is headed for New York to marry one of America’s wealthiest heirs–a man she has never even met. When her doubts gain the upper hand, she swaps identities with her maid Dora. She wants a chance at "real life," even if it means giving up financial security. For Charlotte, it’s a risk she’s willing to take. But what begins as the whim of a spoiled rich girl becomes a test of survival beyond her blackest nightmare.

For Dora, it’s the chance of a lifetime. She is thrust into a fairy tale amid ball gowns and lavish mansions, yet is tormented by the possibility of discovery–and humiliation. And what of the man who believes she is indeed his intended? Is this what her heart truly longs for?

My Thoughts:

This book is adorable. Honestly! I really, really enjoyed it, despite the hokey-sounding premise that likely makes you think ‘wasn’t that the plot of ‘The Prince and the Pauper’? Sure, it’s been done before… but Moser’s tale of two young women switching places is so sweet and fun that it doesn’t matter.

I’ll keep my review short, because I don’t want to spoil anyone else’s enjoyment with giving away too many details… but I found the historical detail fascinating, the comparison between England and New York during the same time period equally as interesting, and the exploits of the ladies as they play each other’s roles very well done.

Each young woman learns, grows, and changes over the course of the novel, and while there are some cheesy moments that made me groan, they can be overlooked by the excellent writing, the surrounding detail, and the twists of the plot. I also very much liked Moser’s notes at the back of the novel, telling us where the story changed as she wrote it and which things she didn’t intend to happen that did (and some things she intended to happen that didn’t!).

The inspirational aspect of the novel is very present, but again, not overwhelming in the sense that I think this book will find a broad audience. If you’re a fan of the time period, I encourage you to give it a shot and try it for yourself!

Here’s a little Q&A with the author to entice you in the meantime :) : Q&A with Nancy Moser (PDF)

About the Author: Nancy Moser is the author of three inspirational humor books and a eighteen novels, including Mozart’s Sister, Just Jane, and Time Lottery, a Christy Award winner. She is an inspirational speaker, giving seminars around the country. She has earned a degree in architecture; run a business with her husband; traveled extensively in Europe; and has performed in various theaters, symphonies, and choirs. She and her husband have three grown children and make their home in the Midwest. Read more about her books at www.nancymoser.com.

Book has been provided courtesy of Baker Publishing Group and Graf-Martin Communications, Inc. Available at your favourite bookseller from Bethany House, a division of Baker Publishing Group.

30
Aug

August Blog Tour: ‘Touching the Clouds’

   Posted by: Faith   in Rye Thoughts

And onto book three of the blog tour! One more to go after this, so stay tuned.

Touching the CloudsBonnie Leon

She went looking for adventure . . . and found more than she bargained for.touching

Kate Evans is an adventurous and independent young woman with a pioneering spirit. When she leaves her home in Washington State to follow her dream of being an Alaskan bush pilot, she knows it will be an uphill battle. But she never expected it to be quite like this. As the lone woman in a man’s world, she finds that contending with people’s expectations is almost as treacherous as navigating the wild arctic storms.

When she crosses paths with a mysterious man living alone in the forbidding wilderness, she faces a new challenge. Can Kate break through the walls he has put up around his heart? And will fear keep her from realizing her dreams?

Book 1 in the Alaskan Skies series, Touching the Clouds will draw you in with raw emotion and suspense, all against the stunning backdrop of the Alaskan wilds.

 

My Thoughts:

Yes, the main character is adventurous, likable, and flawed (that’s a good thing). No, the romance doesn’t particularly tug at the heartstrings, and the “love triangle” seems more ‘because it had to be there’ than ‘natural progression of the heart’. Yes, there’s suspense… but no, I don’t think there’s quite the “raw emotion” of the synopsis’ claim.

I’ll start by saying this: The book is interesting if you don’t know a lot about planes, flying, or Alaska around the 1930s. However, there isn’t a whole lot of historical detail included, and the one attempt by the main character to deal with racial tensions comes out of nowhere and seems more contrived than anything else (since it doesn’t connect with anything else in the story). But I learned a few things about planes, flying, and pilots of small charter flights, which I found quite interesting.

Back to the story…

As much as I didn’t mind the main character, Kate, I didn’t care for the pacing of the book. This could be due to the fact that it’s the first book in the series and tried to set up for the next books, but I found that there wasn’t a whole lot of plot… rather, it seemed very episodic. Here’s a flight, a problem with the flight, the problem is solved, Kate goes home. Next chapter there’s another flight, maybe a problem (or maybe not), everything’s okay, Kate goes somewhere. Next chapter we have another flight… rinse and repeat. I kept wondering when the actual meat of the story would kick in, but it never did…

And without giving too much away, the love triangle didn’t make sense. In a literary love triangle, you normally have the good guy, the ‘bad boy’, and the main character has to choose between the man she wants to be with and the man she knows she should be with. Something like that, anyway. And usually as a reader, you can see clearly who she should be with, even while she strays off to the wrong guy… but here, we have a love triangle with two perfectly normal guys, neither one better than the other (in fact, they seemed almost like carbon copies at times) and you really don’t know who to root for. When she eventually lets one down for the other one, I felt almost like she just kicked a puppy… because she had no reason to let that one go. Literally. No. Reason.

bonnieleonWhich again, is why the book left a lot to be desired. Yes, I learned a few things, but without a clear focus in the plot, combined with a love triangle that feels more like a cut-and-paste plot device, I can’t say I’ll read anything else in this series. Which is too bad, because ultimately the writing was very good! 

I think I’ll find a different novel from the author, and try that instead. I won’t give up on her yet! I just won’t read more of this particular series.

About the Author

Bonnie Leon is the bestselling author of more than ten historical fiction novels. She stays busy teaching women’s Bible studies and speaking at writing seminars and conventions. She and her husband, Greg, live in Oregon.

Book has been provided courtesy of Baker Publishing Group and Graf-Martin Communications, Inc. Available at your favourite bookseller from Revell, a division of Baker Publishing Group.

29
Aug

‘Amish Proverbs’ Review & Giveaway!

   Posted by: Faith   in Rye Thoughts

Well, heidy-ho there good neighbors!

What better way to start off the week than with a nice little giveaway from the generous people over at Baker Publishing Group & Graf-Martin Communications?

Yep, that’s right… if you’re into all things Plain – or if you like collecting phrases and sayings from different cultures / people groups – this is something you’ll be very interested in!

The book is:

Amish Proverbs:

Words of Wisdom from the Simple Life 

by Suzanne Woods Fisher

amishproverbs

Fisher has spent a great deal of time with the Amish and has collected more than 200 proverbs which cover all aspects of life, from finances to faith to family, as well as overcoming life’s frustrations. Proverbs help point us all toward wisdom, toward good judgment, toward God’s teachings.

A couple of my favorite proverbs from the book are:

“A sweater is a garment worn by a child when his mother feels chilly.” (p.71)

“Those who fear the future are likely to fumble the present.” (p.105)

…and possibly my favorite of all…

“Instead of complaining that the rosebush is full of thorns, be glad that the thornbush has roses.” (p.138)

Now that’s a different way of looking at things!

I’ve been asked to post a proverb or saying that was common from my mother or father when growing up, but honestly, I can’t think of anything specific that was said over and over again. I think the closest we had to a family proverb was, “God gave you a brain… use it!” a phrase that I know was said to me and each of my siblings on multiple occasions when we we did something stupid or refused to solve a problem / couldn’t see the consequences of an action / or did anything requiring thought that we didn’t think through.

In addition to the proverbs, Fisher provides some insight into the Amish community, their faith, and their social life, along with some reflections of her own on God’s role in the Amish way of life.

Sound interesting? You can win a copy!

Contest is open to residents of Canada and the U.S. (sorry, international readers… another time!).

All you have to do is leave a comment on this post with your NAME and EMAIL address, and share a proverb from your own household – one you grew up hearing, or maybe one you say now! Contest is open until Sept. 6th.

Please feel free to Tweet, Facebook, or blog about the contest, and I’d love it if you followed my blog (RSS readers count too!). While this won’t get you extra entries (since I want to keep it simple), I’d greatly appreciate it… and I promise to do the same for you if I enter one of your contests in the future. :)

Fisher_SuzanneWoodsAbout the Author 

Suzanne Woods Fisher is the CBA bestselling author of The Choice, The Waiting, Amish Peace, and Amish Proverbs. Her interest in the Anabaptist cultures can be directly traced to her grandfather, W. D. Benedict, who was raised in the Old Order German Baptist Brethren Church in Franklin County, Pennsylvania. Benedict eventually became publisher of Christianity Today magazine. Suzanne is the host of a radio show called Amish Wisdom and her work has appeared in many magazines. She lives in California.

 

(Book has been provided courtesy of Baker Publishing Group and Graf-Martin Communications, Inc. Available at your favourite bookseller from Revell, a division of Baker Publishing Group.)

29
Aug

In My Mailbox (9)

   Posted by: Faith   in Rye Thoughts

In my mailbox is a weekly meme started by The Story Siren to showcase books you’ve received for review, bought, borrowed, or swapped. Anyone can participate, and it’s a great way to showcase new books and encourage blogger/commenter interaction!

Just one thing for me this week…

ARC of

 

The World is Bigger Now: An American Journalist’s Release from Captivity in North Korea

by Euna Lee

 

 

 

 

What came in your mailbox this week? :)

28
Aug

Self-Editing #5: Say It, Don’t Think It

   Posted by: Faith   in Rye Thoughts

How many times have you told your audience that your character wondered something, rather than actually allowed her to wonder it for herself?

Yes, yes, I hear the “Faith, now you’re really confusing me…” voices out there, so here’s what I mean…

Example:

Jennifer looked around the room. She wondered why her brother couldn’t be bothered to clean up after himself, even when he knew their guests would arrive later today.

Corrected Example:

Jennifer looked around the room. Why didn’t Chris ever bother to clean up?

 

See what I mean? Rather than telling the reader that the character is wondering, you show it through a direct thought or through the deep third-person POV. This kind of thing crops up with things like:

    • he/she wondered
    • he/she knew
    • he/she thought
    • he/she considered
    • …etc…

I have a tendency to make this mistake ALL the time in first drafts, and spend a lot of time rephrasing sections of my character’s internal dialogue. It’s that pesky “tell” monster that I have to beat time and time again…

How about you… do you find your character ‘wonders’ and ‘knows’ a little too often on your pages?